Monday, March 30, 2009

exhaustion.good.exhaustion.bad.

Exhaustion is the color blue
It feels rewarding
Its smell is recognizable: Like the flash back to the beginning of your exhaustion
It tastes almost...bittersweet
It sounds like that tender laugh of someone smiling
It looks like a little boy laying on a tramp during summer looking at the clouds pass him by
Exhaustion makes me feel at ease
Exhaustion is multicolored
It feels like a claustrophobic hot room
It smells sickly
It tastes bland, almost like you've eaten a food with no flavor
It sounds like the noises one hears when they have a headache; piercing
It looks uncomfortable
Exhaustion makes me achey

1 comment:

  1. Work a little more on the smell and taste on the first one, but I like the positive spin. This word seems to have a negative connotation. The second one is the one that I relate to the most. Good job conveying two different emotions.

    Mrs. Scott

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