Motivation is RED
It feels like the beads of sweat running down your face
It sounds like a cheering crowd
It smells like a leather basketball
Motivation looks like a basketball on its way down from a missed shot
It tastes like an ice cold Gatorade
It makes me feel like I’m on top of the world
Motivation is BLACK
It feels like a heavy back pack
It sounds like a thunder storm
It smells like stinky garbage
It looks like a messy room
It tastes like an onion after taste
It makes me feel like I’m in a big black hole
It feels like the beads of sweat running down your face
It sounds like a cheering crowd
It smells like a leather basketball
Motivation looks like a basketball on its way down from a missed shot
It tastes like an ice cold Gatorade
It makes me feel like I’m on top of the world
Motivation is BLACK
It feels like a heavy back pack
It sounds like a thunder storm
It smells like stinky garbage
It looks like a messy room
It tastes like an onion after taste
It makes me feel like I’m in a big black hole
Interesting second poem....I'm not sure of the context you are writing it in...it reads more like depression, but you definitely conveyed more than one different tone to the poem.
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